Valiant effort; C minus; Don’t give up your day job.
For a better grade, rewrite in iambic pentameter.
Silly fellow. Not being enrolled in your creative writing endeavor, there can be no acceptable grade given for this wee doggerel. I think it was actually a fail, in the pass-fail system. If you'd care to demonstrate your "I am Bick," next time comment in rhyme. Best creative wishes.