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To: Onthebrink

Few things.
1) I’m a fan of the Oxford comma; I think it improves readability.
2) “Check out the below and make your own mind.” Poorly worded sentence.
3) “ . . . over half its warship sunk” They either had only a single ship and >50% of it stayed afloat, or an “s” needs to be added to “warship.”
Overall I enjoy reading these articles.


6 posted on 02/04/2021 9:17:17 AM PST by Andyman (The truth shall make you FReep.)
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To: Andyman

Overall, I enjoy reading these articles, too.

;)


12 posted on 02/04/2021 9:33:22 AM PST by cuban leaf (We killed our economy and damaged our culture. In 2021 we will pine for the salad days of 2020.)
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