I listened through. I hear talent in music and a good voice but lack of emotion in voice, seemed monotone/just singing no feeling in what’s being sung.
The current wording seems to minimize subjects (real life situations) that are crimes. I just think there are many better subjects or ways to word that would be positive to the listener instead of just “feel so bad” or “sad” about committing armed holdup, robbery, etc.
Talented but could really be much more with a spark from God’s help for best usage of talents and inspiration for those involved in creation and those listening.
Hope you share a future song. I look forward to hearing it.
Thanks for your kind comments.