[be-baw]

Terrific job. A tad sycophantic perhaps, but otherwise near perfect. Thanks for sharing.

[poconopundit]

Thanks very much.  Writing these and doing the graphics is a fun diversion for me.  As long as I hear a few people liked it, it was worth it.

I suppose the price of perfection is time.  Given enough time, any story can be trimmed of the non-essential and poor word choice can be substituted with something better.

But I notice that when I near finishing one of these FR vanities, I don't have the patience to edit it rigorously so I end up posting some foolish errors.  Too bad, you can't correct the errors on FR.  Then again, if you could, maybe I could never finish it :-)