Your excerpt would have been a lot more effective if you had found a way to indicate “Williams” is “Walter E. Williams.”
Your petty criticism would have been a lot more effective if you had mentioned “Walter E. Williams” is “Walter E. Williams, a syndicated columnist and economist at George Mason University.”
Yep I agree. Mr. Williams could have been my neighbor for all I know. My first reaction was, who?
That is helpful. However, I was able to immediately eliminate Juan Williams as an option.