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I could pick this apart, including the grammar, but I'd like to see what you think.
1 posted on 02/07/2012 12:07:05 AM PST by 2ndDivisionVet
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Just an intern, in other words a college student i.e. someone woefully ignorant who likes to hear the sound of his own voice.


2 posted on 02/07/2012 12:09:33 AM PST by JMS
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Since her vice presidential loss in 2008, Sarah Palin has not nearly as invested...

I don't want to pick on the grammar but I can't read past anything that bad. Gives me a headache.

Who is this Brian Tams and why would anyone care what he/she thinks?

3 posted on 02/07/2012 12:10:06 AM PST by TigersEye (Life is about choices. Your choices. Make good ones.)
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Brian Tam, Fox News Intern - Interns do have a history of having credibility in the world of politics.


4 posted on 02/07/2012 12:10:25 AM PST by Just mythoughts (Luke 17:32 Remember Lot's wife.)
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“A nightstick the size of a telephone pole and the muscle to wield it effortlessly.”


Annoy liberals, idiots and the GOP-E,
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5 posted on 02/07/2012 12:11:13 AM PST by onyx (SUPPORT FREE REPUBLIC, DONATE MONTHLY. If you want on Sarah Palin's Ping List, let me know.)
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Good grief, the very first “sentence” of the story isn’t even a sentence. Was this a paper for a remedial social studies class at an “alternative school” somewhere? Because holy crap, this is awful writing. This kid needs to find a different profession.


6 posted on 02/07/2012 12:13:59 AM PST by xjcsa (Ridiculing the ridiculous since the day I was born.)
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“I am currently a sophomore student within NYU’s school of journalism. I work with the video production team at Fox News. I have an uncontrollable desire to write, which could explain my interests in journalism. Because I’m annoyingly pedantic and inquisitive, I tend to frequently critique my writing as well as others’....”

NYU.

Sophomore.

I’m concerned about FNC.


7 posted on 02/07/2012 12:14:59 AM PST by dixiechick2000 (This hobbit is looking for her pitchfork...God help the GOP if I find it.)
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To: 2ndDivisionVet; Abbeville Conservative; abigailsmybaby; afnamvet; alley cat; antceecee; ...
Written by a Faux News Intern!

Sarah Palin's New Ping List


8 posted on 02/07/2012 12:14:59 AM PST by onyx (SUPPORT FREE REPUBLIC, DONATE MONTHLY. If you want on Sarah Palin's Ping List, let me know.)
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“...Palin’s reign has ended and nothing she says should be taken under consideration any longer.”

Then what are you getting your panties in a wad about?


10 posted on 02/07/2012 12:20:24 AM PST by ReneeLynn (Socialism is SO yesterday. Fascism, it's the new black. Mmm mmm mmm...)
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You think Brian Tam is short for Meghan McCain?


11 posted on 02/07/2012 12:20:24 AM PST by beaversmom
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Petty, pretentious and predictable.


12 posted on 02/07/2012 12:23:18 AM PST by csense
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It's tough to be both pretentious and pointless at the same time.

I would have been beaten by the nuns, if I turned in an assignment this poorly written in grammar school.

And I would have deserved it.

15 posted on 02/07/2012 12:35:35 AM PST by dead (I've got my eye out for Mullah Omar.)
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Another writer discover’s the Basic Law of Journalism. Which is, if you want your piece to be read, put Palin’s name in the headline.

She’s irrelevant, he says, but he uses her name anyway because without it... no one is going to even click on his piece. But with her name in the title, he’s guaranteed to get a bit of traffic.

Thats how irrelevant she is.


16 posted on 02/07/2012 12:36:37 AM PST by marron
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Brian Tam

17 posted on 02/07/2012 12:38:13 AM PST by kcvl
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“Put simply, she does not have the expertise or the likeability factor to make a difference in another candidate’s campaign or administration.”

Put simply, this nitwit is a green progressive intern who will quite likely end up on al gore’s Current TV as an anchor person or at msnbc delivering mail.


23 posted on 02/07/2012 1:01:01 AM PST by MestaMachine (obama kills)
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The best and the brightest. /sarc


27 posted on 02/07/2012 1:26:21 AM PST by central_va ( I won't be reconstructed and I do not give a damn.)
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"Brian Tam
I am currently a sophomore student within NYU's school of journalism. I work with the video production team at Fox News. I have an uncontrollable desire to write, which could explain my interests in journalism. Because I'm annoyingly pedantic and inquisitive, I tend to frequently critique my writing as well as others'.... "


He also wants Chinese New Years to be a National Holiday in the U.S.A.
Isn't that special.
30 posted on 02/07/2012 1:33:07 AM PST by Tainan (Cogito, ergo conservatus sum)
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I hope Roger Ailes approves of this idiot punk writer’s essay because he just received a copy of it.


31 posted on 02/07/2012 2:06:02 AM PST by onyx (SUPPORT FREE REPUBLIC, DONATE MONTHLY. If you want on Sarah Palin's Ping List, let me know.)
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It goes like this. Sarah vets Willsrd or Obama will.Willard want fight back against Obama (because he is a wimp like McCrap)


32 posted on 02/07/2012 2:20:01 AM PST by personalaccts (Is George W going to protect the border?)
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Air head.


34 posted on 02/07/2012 2:46:16 AM PST by AdaGray
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The writer isn’t even 21 years old and has an uncontrollable urge to write...


35 posted on 02/07/2012 3:15:33 AM PST by Dixie Yooper (Ephesians 6:11)
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