That’s a good, concise way to say it. If (hopefully when) LB 654 gets passed and referred to the full legislature I might steal that (with your permission, of course. lol) to put in the paper. Anybody should be able to understand that one.
I write for other people all the time, so I have no problem with you using any of that. Feel free to modify it or enhance it as you wish too. Nebraska is a pretty conservative state, so I’m hoping there are enough people with common sense there to understand how this type of bill will actually benefit them.