1 posted on
11/12/2010 9:29:05 PM PST by
pickrell
To: pickrell
I was ensconced upon the commode awaiting developments, while idly looking around the bathroom. Worst vanity opening line ever.
2 posted on
11/12/2010 9:33:12 PM PST by
Darkwolf377
( Mm, your tears are so yummy and sweet!Oh, the tears of unfathomable sadness! Mm-yummy! --E. Cartman)
To: pickrell
Like your writing style - I read it in the Jean Shepard inner voice - It worked - nice story.
4 posted on
11/12/2010 9:40:40 PM PST by
libertarian27
(Ingsoc: Department of Life, Department of Liberty, Department of Happiness)
To: pickrell
Fun story to read! - thanks
6 posted on
11/12/2010 9:41:56 PM PST by
voteNRA
(A citizenry armed with rifles simply cannot be tyrannized)
To: pickrell
To: pickrell
To: pickrell; humblegunner
Your father insinuated you were too stupid to be his child. Then, rather than moving the table out from under the damaged portion of the ceiling, he and his friends continued their game.
Hoooooooookay....
At least you didn’t excerpt.
9 posted on
11/12/2010 9:47:06 PM PST by
Grizzled Bear
(Does not play well with others)
To: pickrell
I thought it was awesome. :-)
To: pickrell
That was a very good story! Great ending.
12 posted on
11/12/2010 9:50:40 PM PST by
Outlaw Woman
(No Compromise!)
To: pickrell
Pretty good, as far as blogs go, not bad...
I especially admire you for not getting electrocuted pumping water down there where there are lights and wires and volts and things!!!
Hint: Your writing skills vastly outweigh your exterminator skills!!
Buy some D-Con!!!
14 posted on
11/12/2010 9:56:51 PM PST by
djf
(The word "concise" is too big!)
To: pickrell
You write a bit like IowaHawk.
15 posted on
11/12/2010 9:59:37 PM PST by
Hoosier-Daddy
( "It does no good to be a super power if you have to worry what the neighbors think." BuffaloJack)
To: pickrell
To: pickrell
Great story and congratulations on your courage for telling it.
17 posted on
11/12/2010 10:33:40 PM PST by
freekitty
(Give me back my conservative vote; then find me a real conservative to vote for)
To: pickrell
Wish the author had used “plaster” instead of “drywall”. It goes so much better with the cast iron bathtub era. But a good read anyway.
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