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1 posted on 04/18/2006 3:24:38 PM PDT by mft112345

To: mft112345

Marked for later read.

2 posted on 04/18/2006 4:52:26 PM PDT by Alien Gunfighter (Secular Misanthropist)

To: mft112345

Just a quick suggestion for now: consider some synonyms for the word "crap" as it's overused in the beginning of the story.

3 posted on 04/18/2006 5:03:42 PM PDT by Jaysun (If anything is possible, then it's possible that nothing is possible.)

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