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To: mft112345

Just a quick suggestion for now: consider some synonyms for the word "crap" as it's overused in the beginning of the story.

3 posted on 04/18/2006 5:03:42 PM PDT by Jaysun (If anything is possible, then it's possible that nothing is possible.)

To: Jaysun

Thanks. I removed the word.

4 posted on 04/24/2006 7:34:59 AM PDT by mft112345 ("The wise man will make more opportunities than he finds." Sir Francis Bacon)

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