To: Darkchylde; Darksheare
A Weeping of Stones
This is where the love went, that sang from youthful eyes,
Into the stone which weeps its tears, when joined by weeping skies.
The stone now shouts its lie out, the pain from metal blade,
Here lies the symbol of a love. Heres where the pain has stayed.
The sculptor had an artful eye, and caught the loving glance.
He froze it with a chilling spell, and sundered loves last chance.
Though art could capture what he saw, his heart was dead to sight,
In carving out a lovers stare, he closed off lovings light.
The girl has gone now, her reward, unknown to all of us,
How sad that this reminder then, becomes a warning thus,
Look out upon the world and see the wonder that is there,
But do not close your eye to love, and do not lose your share.
The sculptor died alone, they said, a sad and lonely man,
Who could have found fond happiness, as any of us can.
His fame did not provide for him the pleasures that hed planned.
But I have seen a face like hers on children of this land.
NicknamedBob . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . November 10, 2004
40,453 posted on
11/10/2004 7:49:43 PM PST by
NicknamedBob
(My first book is out! -- You may need gloves... AuthorHouse.Com/BookStore, look for Hawthorne.)
To: NicknamedBob
That's good. I've tried some different ways
of writing, from free verse to haiku, but
that form of writing I simply cannot do.
Things like lyric poetry escape my abilities.
40,456 posted on
11/10/2004 7:58:06 PM PST by
Darkchylde
(Resistentialism - seemingly spiteful behavior manifested by inanimate objects)
To: NicknamedBob
NB
You do some nice work
But why is it always so *SAD*??
We should be celebrating now -- Arafat is DEAD. For real this time.
40,506 posted on
11/10/2004 10:05:42 PM PST by
freedumb2003
(Democrat credo: If we win, we win: if we lose it is theft!)
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