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To: Tax-chick

Basically. I just can't think of anyway to develop it, that's not
what I write anyway. So, that's why I only write short "stories".


38,824 posted on 11/07/2004 6:23:33 PM PST by Darkchylde (Resistentialism - seemingly spiteful behavior manifested by inanimate objects)
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To: Darkchylde
It's concise and to the point, with adequate characterization and a bang-up finish!

My daughter would produce a thousand words of dialogue and description, and the couple would still be having cocktails. I read her stories and say, "Would you just kill somebody, already?"

38,830 posted on 11/07/2004 6:26:40 PM PST by Tax-chick (First we had all the money, then we got all the votes, now we have all the fun!)
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