To: SAMWolf; bentfeather; Darksheare; All
different as night and day while
the same in so many ways
i chased you down
til you stopped running
and there you stood
steadfast against me
though I longed for you
we could turn and walk away from each other
except we chose to walk hand in hand
separate in desire
yet together in friendship
no more battles except those we would choose together
sai 10.03
455 posted on
10/10/2003 8:24:16 PM PDT by
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
To: snippy_about_it
different as night and day while
the same in so many ways
i chased you down
til you stopped running....
Wow, wow!!
Snippy,
Your writing is strong, I love it. Don't stop writing girlfriend, you're good.
To: snippy_about_it; bentfeather
WOW WOW is right!
IMHO, and I'm not in anyway a poetry expert, I think this one is good enough to get published. Some of the others lately have been great stuff. You write from the heart and it shows.
472 posted on
10/11/2003 9:02:32 AM PDT by
SAMWolf
(Two can live as cheaply as one, for half as long.)
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