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To: Darkchylde
Dragon's rhymes, forgotten times
in the land of make believe.
Mystic mines, enchanted pines,
I might just never leave.
Siren's sighs, sweet little lies
but I just cannot bother.
Gossamer wings, a pixie sings
& I long for no other.
Playing a lyre by the Phoenix' fire,
nothing is as it seemed.
Dragon's rhymes, forgotten times...
youth cannot be redeemed

OH MY GOODNESS! Wonderful poem you have written!!

897 posted on 09/28/2003 6:06:38 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (Poets' Know the Unknown)
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To: bentfeather
'King of Drek and Drivel' alert!
Chant with me: "King of Drek! King of Drek!"
And now for the King of Drek!

A discourse on time?

Our lives are not our own
on borrowed time we burn our flames
and play our games
like a restless wanderer under the moon
or a dog without a bone
our time here is only on loan
when we wake we see the day
we wake to a world not our own
journey starts and journey ends
never to begin again
never to be lived again
over in a brief blink of time
It takes all our lives as a seeming eternity
and is over all too quickly
a commodity easily squandered
priceless and impossible to hoard
well spent with friends and good company
thus so the nature of our time
898 posted on 09/28/2003 6:25:48 PM PDT by Darksheare (And something just for the DU lurkers (_*_) You been mooned!)
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To: bentfeather
I changed a few lines in it & omitted others.
It originally started as "tea times, dragon's
rhymes", but when I got to the end, I wanted it
to reflect the forgotten times of childhood, so
I switched it around & changed "tea" to "forgotten".
I was going to put in a line about gnomes, but decided
against it (I was running out of room on the page &
didn't like the way it sounded in the poem). I like this
one the way it is, "forgotten times" in the beginning has
a sense of ancient times kids like to imagine, with knights
& such. But in the end "forgotten times" reflects the
imagination of a child lost to adulthood. I'm glad
you like it, it took me about half an hour to think
it through (head cold, you know).

I remember two books I used to read, thick books
for a little kid, white covers. I think they were
called "World's Greatest Fairytales". It's just my
humble opinion, but I believe they're great books
to get the imagination going...

899 posted on 09/28/2003 6:39:32 PM PDT by Darkchylde (Publishable Menacing Inc.)
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