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To: Argh; bentfeather; Flurry
Thanks Argh - Flurry saw a poem my son wrote yesterday and commented about his talent - (he's 12) - Flurry has been writing these great poems on Word For The Day so he wrote one for my son. I might add that he wrote this in about 20 minutes this morning.....

"Young Patriot"

From Texas hails a Patriot,

Who loves his Country so.

He loves the Freedoms we possess,

And wants the world to know.

That people fought and many died,

So we can have this place.

The US is a wondrous land,

Where God has shed his grace.

Support our troops and keep them safe,

Don’t ever put them down.

Cause if you do you’d best watch out,

When Brian comes to town.

So watch your mouth about our men,

And burn that protest sign.

He may be only twelve years old,

But he will draw a line.

Don’t make him mad for he is wise,

Yes way beyond his years.

I’d hate to see him take that sign,

And smash it tween your ears.

Flurry 9/12/03

281 posted on 09/12/2003 9:57:16 AM PDT by WhyisaTexasgirlinPA
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To: WhyisaTexasgirlinPA; Flurry
Dear Whyisa,

Thank You so much for visiting The Dargon Flies Liar.


"Young Patriot" is a wonderful poem, thanks so much.

Keep writing you are the right age to have a lifetime of writing ahead of you.

310 posted on 09/15/2003 6:28:18 PM PDT by Soaring Feather
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