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To: bentfeather
Good Morning
Bent Feather
I am sorry to say, that
In the wee hours of the morning
When sensible, practical people were sleeping
I tried again to say
Something, anything to
Try and brighten your day

It wasn’t easy, so don’t complain

Metaphors were mixed,
allusions confused
I got way off track,
The language I abused

But here it is
A measured response to
Message #40:

She asked of her tears,
what should she do with them
Give them to me, I said
I will guard them well

And what of my passion she said,
What will I do with it
Give it to me, I said
I will take it and give it again

And what of my frame, she asked
What shall go therein
Give it to me my fair lady

We will fill it with all the colors of spring
With memories of dancing on the clouds
And sumptuous picnics in the wood
Under the shade of towering tress
Where the birds will sing for us
And the squirrels will play

With the echos of laughter
We will fill your frame

Running and chasing,
happy kisses in the rain
Drenching afternoon showers

We’ll go, looking for our rainbow
And finding it,
Know the promise that it shows

Never knowing the hour
lost in each other
not caring about time
Just cramming a life of living
Into a moment
To fill your gilded frame

I’ve waited a lifetime
to catch your tears with soft kisses,
to rub away your hurts
to absorb your pain

I have waited forever
to feel your passion close,
lighting a fire, and letting it burn

I will wait eternal to fill your frame
with joy, laughter, and music and
the joy of spring throughout all the seasons

I will fill your frame
With all of the colors
that make your heart sing

Give me your heart and I’ll mend it.
And put it back in place, again

And then, just then, we may go and box with the winds.

And I will hold you close,
and never let you go

(unless of course, you insist)


103 posted on 09/02/2003 11:55:32 PM PDT by Rhyminsimon
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To: Rhyminsimon
Good morning Rhyminsimon.

Nice bit of work you have done in the night.
Often that is when the muse is best
and the poet is blessed to write nite
whispers in verse to pass the test.
104 posted on 09/03/2003 5:51:52 AM PDT by Soaring Feather
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