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very hot
lake is low
picture evades me still
moon fiery red
I'm a putz

107 posted on 08/14/2002 7:54:26 PM PDT by Rev. Lou Chenary

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To: Rev. Lou Chenary

I like that....my son loves to write in Haiku..and I enjoy reading Haiku...tho I cannot do it...I am longwinded, talk on and on...

Haiku requires an economy of words, but still must convey the thought...your Haiku was great....

108 posted on 08/14/2002 8:03:58 PM PDT by andysandmikesmom

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To: Rev. Lou Chenary

Lou, you are a poet...beseiged by skeeters ;-)

109 posted on 08/14/2002 8:05:39 PM PDT by habs4ever

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To: Rev. Lou Chenary

is your Moon firey red?
that is interesting
is it still hot there?

117 posted on 08/14/2002 8:34:42 PM PDT by palo verde

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