To: Darksheare
I loved your story from last night...you really have quite a talent for writing....have you ever tried to get published??? You should!!!!!!!
921 posted on
04/12/2002 4:45:15 PM PDT by
Neets
To: OneidaM
Published? Umm... no. I can write in short story form, but as soon as I try to streatch it out.. it loses coherence. (I have a partial first foley edition of the same story on my machine. Highly fractious. Gotta re-write the whole thing.) Basic premise of the story is, guy is forced to be king. Guy hates being king. Evil guy in southern lands comes in force into guy's kingdom. Huge war, guy and evil one both kill each other.. A long time passes. Guy is forgotten about, but evil one is still causing much mischief. The Diety takes a stroll through the vaults and finds guy laying peacefully on his bier, smiling. Brings him back to finish the job he was supposed to do long before. Much trouble, panic, and mayhem ensue before the whole thing ends. Oh, and the place is kinda like 'Alice in Wonderland' meets a Tori Amos song on an acid trip high. (Nothing is as it appears, and the cute things can hurt you mightily.) Probably not a publishable story. But, it is worth a shot. Just got to find a publisher.
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