Link? Because you seem to be citing what another student claimed about the paper.
Also, she failed her with a zero where a 65 was passing, thus making it impossible for her to achieve a passing grade no matter how perfect the rest of her coursework was. Nobody gets a zero on a completed college essay. She could’ve had the intelligibility of 70s stoner rock lyrics and gotten a 50.
You don’t have to take my word for it. You can read her essay her essay https://x.com/TurningPointOU/status/1994157531531280787. And she got zero of 25 points. I don’t know, if 0 points is justified but in my opinion this was definitely a fail.