I was expecting a little more John Wick with your henchmen all getting shot in the head by some obscure boogyman who lost his dog.
LOL. Actually thought about making a more blatant John Wick reference, but tried to hint around the edges of it. Maybe could have done better.
Again I’m a technical writer. This is my first try for a while regarding a short fiction story. Laz (copied) is an actual professional writer. Sure he’ll tear this apart. :)