I’d be glad to read it.
But here’s the $64,000 question. Are you on a deadine? Are we on a deadline? There’s skim and react, which even done quickly can be useful on themes, POV, blind spots, and potential new leads that could expand the narrative scope, hopefully in ways that add depth (as opposed to padding for the sake of padding).
Then there’s editing, which is infinitely expandable.
If you are still looking for readers, let me know.
There’s no deadline. Contact me by freepmail and I will send you a draft of what I have so far.