Posted on 12/23/2024 8:51:04 AM PST by Lazamataz
Received. I’ll send feedback via email.
You're cramping my writing style.
"I like my women like I like my peanut butter - chunky and a little nutty. And this one fit the bill. She had her hands all over me. I couldn't figure out if she was being passionate or searching where my wallet was. She was pushing me towards the bedroom but just then I got a notification alert on my Only Fans Account and I didn't want to miss Bambis big entrance where she does this yoga move. She does this sort of headstand while doing the splits over her body. I was in a quandary and just then . . . "
But you don't want none of that? It piques interest and keeps the story rolling.
Thanks for that tip. I may apply it to the autobiography I finished the draft of last month.
I was always told that the final cost of your book is related to the number of pages, since paper sells by the pound. My novels sell in paperback for around $16.00 which means that my word count needs to stay under 105,000 if I want to make a profit on them after print costs and publisher skimming.
Another thing to consider is the cost of an attractive cover, which will run around $300-350 to have someone else do the design work, but it is essential if you are planning on any type of marketing campaign.
Good Luck!
Melville had spent literally days, writing and re-writing that first line, polishing it until it gleamed like a newly-cut jewel!
"Call me Arnold."
"Call me Bill."
"Call me Charlie."
"Call me Derek."
"Call me ..."
Regards,
“Melville had spent literally days, writing and re-writing that first line, polishing it until it gleamed like a newly-cut jewel!”
Irregardless .. . reports from a friend in Vienna swears that the ORIGINAL draft submitted to the publishers began with:
“Hi ! .. . I’m Lenny!”
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