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To: dragnet2

“He was slated to speak at an investor meeting at the Hilton Hotel soon after the shooting on Wednesday morning. “

there is something wrong with this sentence, but I don’t know how to fix it.


3 posted on 12/05/2024 4:26:12 PM PST by sopo
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To: sopo

lol...


6 posted on 12/05/2024 4:33:01 PM PST by dragnet2 (Diversion and evasion are tools of deceit)
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To: sopo
“He was slated to speak at an investor meeting at the Hilton Hotel soon after the shooting on Wednesday morning. “

there is something wrong with this sentence, but I don’t know how to fix it.

His agenda that day was (1) get shot and (2) speak at the investor meeting at the Hotel immediately after getting shot.

18 posted on 12/05/2024 5:00:30 PM PST by gitmo (If your theology doesn’t become your biography, what good is it?)
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To: sopo

Well, did he speak afterward? /sarc


20 posted on 12/05/2024 5:10:26 PM PST by Tolerance Sucks Rocks (FBI out of Florida!)
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To: sopo

“”there is something wrong with this sentence, but I don’t know how to fix it.””

Same here...I’m sure the people expecting him to speak after he was shot didn’t know how to fix it either. What a horrible sentence....


22 posted on 12/05/2024 5:14:32 PM PST by Thank You Rush
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To: sopo
"He was slated to speak at an investor meeting at the Hilton Hotel soon after the shooting on Wednesday morning."

He was shot Wednesday morning shortly before he was due to speak to investors at the Hilton Hotel.

34 posted on 12/05/2024 5:46:39 PM PST by null and void (Regarding the second Trump presidency, everyone who isn’t terrified is thankful!)
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To: sopo

“He was slated to speak at an investor meeting at the Hilton Hotel soon after the shooting on Wednesday morning. “

“He was slated to speak at an investor meeting at the Hilton Hotel scheduled after the shooting occurred on Wednesday morning. “


37 posted on 12/05/2024 5:53:50 PM PST by wildcard_redneck
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To: sopo

He was slated to speak at an investor meeting at the Hilton Hotel soon after the shooting on Wednesday morning.

Prior to the shooting that morning, he had been scheduled to speak at an investor’s meeting at the Hilton Hotel.


46 posted on 12/05/2024 8:24:20 PM PST by redangus ( )
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