Your rhyme scheme is good, but you need to work on your meter just a little.
A SHOT THRU THE HEART
AND FAUCI'S TO BLAME
HE GIVES THE VACCINE
A REALLY BAD NAME
BURMA SHAVE
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02/04/2024 11:33:31 AM PST by
SaveFerris
(Luke 17:28 ... as it was in the Days of Lot; They did Eat, They Drank, They Bought, They Sold ......)