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To: ansel12
Writing style reminds me of a 4th grade book report when the kid is trying to stretch out the word count.

This: "Excited by the possibility of chatting with a world-famous celebrity, Reed became completely oblivious to her surroundings. But as she continued to ask questions, she noticed something in the background that made everything clear. She saw bodyguards that surrounded this mysterious stranger.

Shoulda been this: "Surrounded by Urban's bodyguards, Reed chatted with the celebrity."

36 posted on 01/07/2023 8:35:53 AM PST by HonkyTonkMan ( )
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To: HonkyTonkMan; ansel12; sphinx; All

> “Shoulda been this: “Surrounded by Urban’s bodyguards, Reed chatted with the celebrity.”

My experience is bodyguards stay outside. I got the sense Keith and Ruth were chatting outside as shown in the picture of the two together.


39 posted on 01/07/2023 8:42:45 AM PST by Hostage (Article V)
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