[Larry Lucido]

Is it just me, or is this excerpt incoherent and disjointed drivel, even for an excerpt? Nobody can tell what’s going on.

Well, it is 3:44 am, and I am up, so here is my take, since folks are commenting on what appears to be incoherent drivel so, why not?

Someone picked up some laundry, between some time or other, and someone, he or she, not sure because the pronouns get used interchangeably, got freaked out because they got near where she lived, so he or she dropped him or her off somewhere else, but it was near where her body was found but he or she apparently didn’t notice the body, not sure why, but they were going to Jackson, hotter than a pepper sprout, don’t know if they got there or if they ever got their laundry.

Is that about it?

Oh, and Milla Jovovich collected something.

[blueplum]

I didn’t write it, but the translation is, Girl one picks him up at 5:30pm drives south to dam. Girl two picks him up at dam at 6:15pm same evening and drives north to campground entrance. Which brought about my questions.

[mass55th]

"Is it just me, or is this excerpt incoherent and disjointed drivel, even for an excerpt? Nobody can tell what’s going on."

No, it's not just you. I tried reading it twice, and couldn't figure it out, so clicked on the link to try to make some sense of it.

[Hot Tabasco]

Is it just me, or is this excerpt incoherent and disjointed drivel,

Good morning.......No, it isn't just you, I couldn't understand it either.

[gitmo]

Someone picked up some laundry, between some time or other, and someone, he or she, not sure because the pronouns get used interchangeably, got freaked out because they got near where she lived, so he or she dropped him or her off somewhere else, but it was near where her body was found but he or she apparently didn’t notice the body, not sure why, but they were going to Jackson, hotter than a pepper sprout, don’t know if they got there or if they ever got their laundry.

Thank you for the clarification. I was completely lost trying to decipher that collage of words.

[moovova]

Hah...I thought it was me! Thanks for saving my sanity..

[MayflowerMadam]

“Is it just me, or is this excerpt incoherent and disjointed drive”

Thank you! I was beginning to think the Covid fever was making me loopy. This made no sense at all.