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To: massmike

Her complaint was about a book titled When Aidan Became a Brother, an award-winning children’s picture book about a transgender boy.

Why is the lede buried in the sixth paragraph?

Title should read: School board interrupts public meeting, mutes dissent after announcing library books promoting transgenderism.

Regards,

3 posted on 07/31/2021 10:39:49 PM PDT by alexander_busek (Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence.)

To: alexander_busek

Perhaps you can edit this one too

4 posted on 07/31/2021 10:46:44 PM PDT by Gene Eric (Don't be a statist!)

To: alexander_busek

Be thankful it was revealed at all.

Writing 101 teaches it should be in the first and last paragraphs. It rarely is done these days.

15 posted on 08/01/2021 6:51:42 AM PDT by bgill (Which came first, the vax or the virus?)

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