Hey are you a grammar Nazi or what? STF up.
If you notice I already made corrections to it, so the only one be an arsehole here is you. Your advice was not asked for and not warranted. So again go away and STFU because you are making yourself look bad.
Nope. Not going to. I tried to read your initial post on my phone. Hence why I posted. I have no idea why you’re panties are in a wad. Grow up and shut up.