LonePalm, le Républicain du verre cassé -
Your adaptation has a unique character
apart from the source while
complimenting the authors.
With a multi-dimensional view of most things,
I spy you did not hamper any elements of music
from the original song. The phrasing structure
is intact, cadence, et.al.
In fact, you've provided me with an excellent dessert;
let me taste and see how sweet it is...
a mellifluous nay, delicious delight
which will be long remembered.
I've sung it twice already!
C'est fantastique!
WRWY
