oh, before I begin refinement, what parts should I leave in?
Operating on almost no sleep.
Remind me again sometime and I’ll try to do a better job.
Try to look at it with a fresh eye for simplification, where it may go by too quick for some to get the joke...
Check Spelling. You got Flynn wrong in one spot, I think.
The Pachinko reference failed to make me laugh, but I could
just be sleeplessly slow...
I did like it more than most. I push for you to refine it a bit so it has a better chance of sustained “virility”...
;-)