"I would suggest going back and including a lot of sex. women like to buy and read books with some sex included"
Bert, I really appreciate your advice. I fear that I do not quite understand much of what women want. My first protagonist was not "tall, dark, and handsome"; he was short, bald, and embarrassingly meek.
460 posted on 08/09/2015 2:33:01 PM PDT by NicknamedBob
("Australia: Every animal is one of three types: Dangerous, Poisonous, or sheep." Rorschach's Blot)