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To: Monkey Face; ThomasThomas; Gefn; Tax-chick; Darksheare; a fool in paradise

Okay, here is another short story. A little different. You get to see how badly I write an action scene.

http://flscifi.blogspot.com/2015/07/short-story-texas-2121.html

It’s set in the Republic of Texas in the future.


1,575 posted on 07/03/2015 9:15:37 PM PDT by GeronL
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To: GeronL

Morning. I’m up earlier than I wanted to be because Tom the Mocker was griping at Jake.


1,577 posted on 07/04/2015 2:56:36 AM PDT by Tax-chick ("And that drummer from that one band whose name I can't remember is also dead."~SamAdams76)
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To: GeronL

That wasn’t bad at all. Needed a bit more “punch” at the end, maybe.


1,578 posted on 07/04/2015 3:00:09 AM PDT by Tax-chick ("And that drummer from that one band whose name I can't remember is also dead."~SamAdams76)
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To: GeronL

I will read it today. I have no plans, so I’m looking forward to reading it.


1,591 posted on 07/04/2015 6:18:37 AM PDT by Gefn (We can't call people without wings angels, so we call them friends- But I call my FRiends angelic)
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