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To: Star Traveler
I see it’s your reading comprehension that’s a problem, too

Here's a little composition tip for a eager knob-polisher such as yourself.

You would want to craft that sentence like this:

"I see you have a reading comprehension problem too."

All these extra "it's" and "that's" and "yours" reveal you for what you are, which is a shallow, semi-literate fangirl who trades in texts, tweets and smiley-faces.

I can comprehend the following. Can you?

You better toss your bullets
You better hide your guns
You better help the children
Let ‘em have some fun
You better count your blessings
Kiss mom and pa
better burn that flag
Cause it ain’t against the law!

You better pledge your allegiance
You’re not the only one
Listen up forefathers

I’m not your son
You better save the country
You better pass the flask
You better join the army
I said: “no thank you, dear old uncle Sam!”

You better toss your bullets
You better hide your guns
You better help the children
Let them have some fun, some fun, some fun!

No, of course you can't. But you can recite it by heart, can't you, and believe it in your heart too?

That's the difference between you and me. Or 'you and I,' as you no doubt would say.

173 posted on 02/11/2015 5:17:07 AM PST by Fightin Whitey
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To: Fightin Whitey

You construct your sentences the way you want and I’ll construct mine the way I want ... :-) ...

BUT ... talking about the iPad Air 2 ... I absolutely love it. I’m getting ready to get rid of my iPad 4 and go with this one!

Here’s the iPad Air 2 Commercial that you’re talking about ... and it’s a terrific commercial!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ROZhrRm88ms

AND ... here’s the iPad Air 2 page ... and get one, they’re terrific!

Change is in the Air! [as in the iPad Air 2]
https://www.apple.com/ipad-air-2/change/


174 posted on 02/11/2015 6:16:08 AM PST by Star Traveler (Remember to keep the Messiah of Israel in the One-World Government that we look forward to coming)
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