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To: Monkey Face
“My name is Todd Toddington, sir” The Mage said with a little bow but the short but stout man, with dark but graying hair, put out his work-dirtied hand for a shake. Very blue-collar, had to respect dirty hands. It was a surprise that Arth wasn't already tasting the mans soul

Still writing. Going kind of slow but I should finish tonight on the first draft.

5,187 posted on 05/16/2015 4:48:52 PM PDT by GeronL (NEW ARRIVALS -> 99 cents buy here: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/541331)
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To: GeronL; Monkey Face

That sentence segment has three “but”s in it ... so far.

I would be throwing darts at it.


5,189 posted on 05/16/2015 4:53:44 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (I could win the Lottery! It only slightly skews the odds against me somewhat that I don't play.)
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To: GeronL
Don't go here ya hear?
5,192 posted on 05/16/2015 6:02:48 PM PDT by null and void (My favorite drawings at the Muhammad cartoon festival in Texas were the two chalk outlines out front)
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