[meadsjn]

a thousand pages to tell a story that 400-500 would have done with some effective editing,

Three main chapters of ten or less pages each, a short introduction, and a short conclusion; such could have made her points clearly, and would have been read, understood, and celebrated by 100 times whatever her existing fan club amounts to.

[Publius]

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