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To: Sir Napsalot
Intergesting article and well written. The writer seemed to build momenbum.. it had a start and rumped up to a more substantial middle. I thought it ended too abruptly.

There I clicked,
The story started,
Caught my interest,
But then departed.


9 posted on 08/06/2012 4:28:55 PM PDT by I see my hands (It's time to.. KICK OUT THE JAMS, MOTHER FREEPERS!)
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To: I see my hands

>>> I thought it ended too abruptly.

Most articles should be like this - short, (smart), makes the point, and fun to read.


26 posted on 08/06/2012 4:57:10 PM PDT by Sir Napsalot (Pravda + Useful Idiots = CCCP; JournOList + Useful Idiots = DopeyChangey!)
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