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To: Netizen
That's not four lines. I didn't break it up like a lyric sheet which is the format on facebook. I can write more verses whenever I want to but it's not written to be a ballad. It's a lot longer with the melody and the phrasing which you cannot hear cuz I just posted the lyrics at FR.

I was going for the right tone, not wordiest song. Melody's great.

7,980 posted on 05/25/2011 7:48:28 PM PDT by floriduh voter ( Shoot. I deleted my tag line by mistake.)
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To: floriduh voter

I just thought it seemed short for telling a story.


7,982 posted on 05/25/2011 7:50:05 PM PDT by Netizen
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