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To: Darksheare
"Four months prior, fighter sweep over Bradamante:"

I feel sorry for you if you ever try to put this into some kind of chronological order.

I like the flavor of it, though. I tend not to write action sequences, but this would make a great intro for my character Talon, (the teacher with the metal arm).

Talon learned sociology the hard way, from the gnat's perspective. Forcibly retired from active combat by getting flung out of known space, he took up teaching. It was the next best thing.

1,605 posted on 07/29/2010 1:41:33 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (Lewis Caroll asked, "How is a raven like a writing desk?" My answer: "They both have plumes of ink.")
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To: NicknamedBob; Tax-chick; Darksheare; sionnsar; fanfan

Anybody home?
Sure is dark in here.


1,606 posted on 07/29/2010 3:10:02 PM PDT by Monkey Face (Welcome home to my awesome army grandson!! Prayers and yellow ribbons for Anoreth of CG fame!)
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To: NicknamedBob

It’s rather easy to keep it in some rude order, there’s the “present” where the “current” action is taking place, then there’s “four months prior” that explains how we got to the “present” events.
Though there are several different viewpoints to the same events to contend with.


1,629 posted on 07/30/2010 7:55:32 AM PDT by Darksheare (I shook hands with Sheryl Crow and all I got was Typhus and a single sheet of toilet paper.)
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