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To: NicknamedBob
Good poem, Bob. I don't think it quite scans, though. Maybe I'm just starting the day half a foot short. Or ahead. What time is it in Singapore, anyway?


1,584 posted on 06/30/2010 4:45:27 AM PDT by Tax-chick (Get to the beach, or at least in the pool! Wearing your bathing suit, please.)
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To: Tax-chick
"Good poem, Bob. I don't think it quite scans, though. Maybe I'm just starting the day half a foot short. Or ahead. What time is it in Singapore, anyway?"

I've gotten a trifle bored with the sing-songy rhythm of too metric a poem, but that doesn't excuse laziness. Your criticism is accurate.

I think Singapore is about eleven hours ahead of us. You can ask Anoreth how tomorrow is shaping up.

1,585 posted on 06/30/2010 5:11:42 AM PDT by NicknamedBob (Lewis Caroll asked, "How is a raven like a writing desk?" My answer: "They both have plumes of ink.")
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That’s what I need ~ a attitude!


1,592 posted on 06/30/2010 6:58:25 AM PDT by Monkey Face (I wear a yellow ribbon for my army hero grandson, and for the intrepid CG explorer!)
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