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The Quiet World
 
  In an effort to get people to look
into each other's eyes more,
and also to appease the mutes,
the government has decided
to allot each person exactly one hundred
and sixty-seven words, per day.

When the phone rings, I put it to my ear
without saying hello. In the restaurant
I point at chicken noodle soup.
I am adjusting well to the new way.

Late at night, I call my long distance lover,
proudly say I only used fifty-nine today.
I saved the rest for you.

When she doesn't respond,
I know she's used up all her words,
so I slowly whisper I love you
thirty-two and a third times.
After that, we just sit on the line
and listen to each other breathe.

Jeffrey McDaniel




3,006 posted on 03/31/2009 9:42:21 AM PDT by Lady Jag (WHERE'S MY BAILOUT!!!!!)
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To: Lady Jag

Wow....breath-taking!

Although the first part about ‘the government’...a bit scary!

Those last six lines are beautiful, L. J.


3,007 posted on 03/31/2009 10:06:06 AM PDT by jaycee (i)
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To: Lady Jag

Thank you, LJ! That is a real ‘thinker’! (Kinda reminds me of “Big Brother” is a sad way.)


3,013 posted on 03/31/2009 10:52:13 AM PDT by yorkie
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To: Lady Jag

Shhhhhh. It’s Quiet Time at Amy’s. :)


3,032 posted on 03/31/2009 1:06:42 PM PDT by Billie
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To: Lady Jag

Love will find a way..Love this poem!


3,080 posted on 04/01/2009 12:25:04 AM PDT by MEG33 (God Bless Our Military)
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