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To: MEG33

a bit darker then my usual poems, but you can judge.

In the Balance

Like a heart in joy, a heart in pain is filled
from wall to wall, the price of grief is billed
and we all pay that price, knowing it will hurt
when its our own heart there in the dirt

A tear is a unspoken wish for relief so full
that we can stand, once the pain is dull
such is the hope of a tattered heart and soul
tired of the load, tired of the never unpaid toll


1,963 posted on 10/22/2008 8:24:10 AM PDT by WayzataJOHNN ( Poetry is the jazz of words, laid down by a feeling soul.)
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To: WayzataJOHNN

I like it..and who cannot relate?


1,971 posted on 10/22/2008 9:04:37 AM PDT by MEG33 (God Bless Our Military)
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To: WayzataJOHNN

I don’t know, WJ, your poetry truly strikes me as wonderful. There’s a ‘flavor’ to your style that is comforting, wish I could describe my feelings about it. I always want to read more of your work.


1,973 posted on 10/22/2008 9:09:20 AM PDT by Lady Jag (DONATE NOW at https://secure.freerepublic.com/donate)
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To: WayzataJOHNN


Nice, WayzataJOHNN. Thank you.

Hope you are having a Warm Wonderful Wednesday.

2,006 posted on 10/22/2008 11:53:49 AM PDT by JustAmy (I wear red every Friday, but I support our Military everyday!!)
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2,040 posted on 10/22/2008 2:09:52 PM PDT by DollyCali (Don't tell GOD how big your storm is -- Tell the storm how B-I-G your God is!)
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