[Tax-chick]

I agree. Her grammar has always been quite good, but her composition skills were far short of her plotting and setting. It’s getting better.

[BibChr]

If I'm reading 6 right, it really is some brilliant storytelling.

But she does need a more aggressive editor who's not afraid to use a thesaurus. She's too prone to reuse the same word again and again (see above), and sometimes in the same sentence (Harry leaned on the table, and spilled the coffee onto the table).