Jeff,
I'm not trying to be a wet blanket douche here.
That message is perhaps workable, it has issues
It sounds to me like a fantasy message.
Teen Suitors need Genuine messages. If you intend to intimidate anyone that is courting your daughter, you gotta deal with the fallout.
We talked about the help and I gave it. We have that simple, straight forward kind of relationship.
She'll keep the mssage for as long as she likes and then put her own there. If you read the thread...you'll find it was not meant for "everyone" who courts my daughter (and she is not a teen any longer)...and the intimidation is clearly only meant for those with "improper intentions", just like it says.
Most of the young men that know my daughter and me, including the one she is dating, are getting a real kick out of it. Most of them enjoy the gun collection anyway here in Idaho.
So...no wet douche, and though you may think it has issues, it is working out fine here in fly-over country.
Thanks anyhow.