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To: Soaring Feather

Scriber

A word so chosen set in place
a thought carefully fixed there
another word set and fixed fair
and you take up the poem’s pace

You wonder as to the next word
fitting each with wonder and worry
building a thing you can not hurry
shaping it, absorbing it as heard

Wondering if other’s will like it
just as sudden not giving a damn or care
its yours, just let them do better, or as fair
then they will appreciate a bit

-Trike


22 posted on 02/12/2007 7:00:48 PM PST by WayzataJOHNN ( Poetry is the jazz of words, laid down by a feeling soul.)
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To: WayzataJOHNN

WOW I do like this poem, going on your page fast.

How are you doing this Winter, I know it's cold for you, do you have lots of snow?


23 posted on 02/12/2007 7:03:57 PM PST by Soaring Feather (I Soar, cause I can....)
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