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To: Soaring Feather
Well let's see what she's fumbling around with:

Lazy Weekend

The sun slides in through the window
And dances across her clothes on the floor

The wind touches the window, nudges the door
sweeps the Autumn leaves over the backyard fence

the fire crackles, the meal stews
stretching seems a burden, rolling over a chore

holding hands so warm and soft
I won't let go if you don't

time stands still, perhaps it was never there
just this moment, is all we'll ever need

starbase 11.26.06
934 posted on 11/25/2006 4:36:01 PM PST by starbase (Understanding Written Propaganda (click "starbase" to learn 22 manipulating tricks!!))
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To: starbase

Oooooo, very good. Good imagery at work there. ;)


935 posted on 11/25/2006 4:52:13 PM PST by Soaring Feather (I Soar, cause I can....)
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To: starbase; WayzataJOHNN

Seeing Her Smile In Darkness



Walking on the beach
soft breezes blowing
her hair brushes my cheek
I smell the sweetness of her
as the wind playes tag with her clothes.

Brilliant sunset, lavender skies
the whisper of night creatues
a walk along a star studded beach
holding her hand,
seeing her smile in darkness
and listening to the beat of our hearts
treasures in the sand.


Soaring Feather
11.25.06


937 posted on 11/25/2006 5:28:26 PM PST by Soaring Feather (I Soar, cause I can....)
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