I suspect a lot of people younger than I am who didn't grow up with the KJV will lose a lot just in how words go together...I prefer to study other versions, but the poetry when it's done right, like in the psalms is outstanding.
Love IS in the little things, day after day, in sickness and health, through crisis and joy, and the commitment and choices we make. IMHO!
Your poem of love was excellent, and so true on so many levels.
Love is the morter amid the stones of life, and what you build is shaped by that love into palaces grand, or cottages snug.