Heh...we have a future NaNoWriMoer in our midst.
I like his little things he put into the story...like looking over and seeing the trees moving! It doesn't say there's a monster over there, but it implies it!
And they way it plays on your emotions. Like "He was just a little kid!"
Heh heh!
I swear, it was completely dictated. He stood right beside me and I typed it as he said it. I had no idea it would be so long!