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To: JenB

I'm thinking of evil twists for my plot...


7,940 posted on 10/11/2005 7:07:09 PM PDT by Corin Stormhands (You are stuck on stupid, I’m not going to answer that question ~ General Honore)
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To: Corin Stormhands; JenB; RosieCotton; Rose in RoseBear
This is Joshua's story. He literally stood right beside me and dictated it to me. Even the question mark on the end! He never has acted like he was afraid or else I might worry! LOL He kept telling me "I have a story I want you to write down." and "I just thought up another part of my story." I think he's going to be another Stephen King. Ha ha ha!

Monster World
by Joshua

There was all these kids at the beach, one went swimming near the shore. Then this other kid went to a really deep part. Then he just disappeared and never showed up again.

Three boys were driving to a swimming hole. One looks back and sees a monster walking past. And then another kid looked off to the side into the forest and he saw some trees moving!

Later on, they were with their mother driving to the Walmart. They shopped and shopped and shopped. Then they came back to the car and a monster was right behind them! The monster walks up when no one is looking and grabbed the middle one! He was just a little kid!

They went back to the beach and none of them swam because it would be too dangerous.
So they just went there and had fun making sand castles. Then, this boy was making a sand castle and then another one of those monsters grabbed him and pulled him down into the sand!

The mother and the two kids went home to go swimming in their pool but when they were putting on their bathing suits, two monsters came out from out of the cabinet and grabbed the two boys and all that was left was the mother and the father.

The end?

7,959 posted on 10/12/2005 5:50:59 AM PDT by 2Jedismom (Expect me when you see me!)
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