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To: bentfeather

I'm not quite happy with any of them... 'cause I
keep running into barriers... they all start the same.

In the radiance of the forgotten ruins
I mourn for love long gone
in the beauty of the misty morn,
in the silence of the dawn.
I wander the ancient halls alone,
my heart beaten, broken, torn
as the once mighty ancient stone
that lays before me on the floor....

From here on out they're different & it doesn't
seem right to just leave it like that, but that's
the only piece I'm actually happy with.


652 posted on 12/15/2004 9:52:07 AM PST by Darkchylde (Radiance of the Forgotten Ruins)
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To: Darkchylde
In the radiance of the forgotten ruins
I mourn for love long gone
in the beauty of the misty morn,
in the silence of the dawn.
I wander the ancient halls alone,
my heart beaten, broken, torn
as the once mighty ancient stone
that lays before me on the floor....


holds the memories from before.

What do you think??
653 posted on 12/15/2004 9:56:47 AM PST by Soaring Feather
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