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I would indeed be truly blessed
if in my hand your heart should rest.
If I could capture the stars from the skies
to remind me of the twinkle in your eyes,
once again blessed I would be,
but your beautiful eyes are lost to me.
You are no longer by my side
& the beat of your heart has faded, died.
So I wish I could in Paradise be,
alone we two, just you & me.


581 posted on 08/17/2004 9:03:09 AM PDT by Darkchylde (Love is a dream, the death of it, a nightmare.)
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To: Darkchylde

So beautiful.

Thank You.


582 posted on 08/17/2004 10:27:55 AM PDT by Soaring Feather
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To: Darkchylde

Sometimes, in writing, a person can try long and hard to find a certain emotion and then watches as another person just goes out and does it.

So you have done to me. Well done!!!


601 posted on 08/18/2004 6:36:29 AM PDT by Colonel_Flagg ("If I had a hammer, I'd use it on Peter, Paul and Mary." - Howard Rosenberg)
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To: Darkchylde

Beautiful poetry Darkchylde, thanks.


615 posted on 08/18/2004 8:05:41 AM PDT by snippy_about_it (Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
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